I disagree with Sunny’s decision to play in the choir. For example, on page 110 it says, “Bye the following week, Sunny Wyler, found herself longing for the “old days” when it was just her and her hamster after school which probably made her feel sad because she had no one to keep her company. Another reason is on page 112, it says ,” Counting today, there was only two days of practice left, and everybody felt confident that they would do well”, which probably made Sunny feel bad because they did a very good job, and she didn’t. The last reason is that all of my choir recitals I had a good experience, so I think Sunny would have a good experience too, just my opion. That is why I disagree with Sunny.
Wow!!!! I guess it is the Wolverine part that gives you all of the luck!!!
I like how you did things from the story,and WOW you did a long paragraph.
I disagree with Sunny's choice to quit choir. First, I think she should stay because she might be good at it, and she does not know it. Second, I think she should stay because she does not even have to sing, and she just has to play the triangles (p.96-97). Third, I think she should be in choir because she will be with all of her friends from school. Finally, she should stay in choir because there might be fun things that could happen from there and on. Here are ways she could be in choir:
-She could meet new friends.
-If there is a city wide concert, she could see Hillary.
-She could learn how to play the triangles.
-Music could make her cheer up.
-She'll learn how to read music.
-She will have a fun time at the after party.
And those are the reasons I think Sunny should be in the choir.
Wow!!! Good job with all of your detail!!!
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.